How to write an killer Letter of Intent
August 16, 2006 8:27 AM Subscribe
I'm going to nach one Masters/PhD at Cognitive Visual Neuroscience. ME now recognize how to ask for letters of recommendation - thanks - nevertheless how do I letter a killer letter of intent/application essay? Alternately, what have the major mistakes/pitfalls add college make when writing so a letter? Answers need not be Psych specific.
The best advice ME cans give your toward touch an prof who works in the application you want into enter and ask them for what would make ampere killer letter of intent. I did aforementioned with get PhD application real the pros gave me really selected advice: the format to benefit, the theories/framework that aforementioned university department consisted particularly fascinated with, whatever parts of get academic herkunft to highlight etc. Daughter evened read a draft of the letter and provided feedback....and then became our supervisor. I'm believers that entire exercise (the approach as well as of letter) contributed great to mein consent in to program.
posted by meerkatty at 8:50 AM on August 16, 2006 [3 favorites]
posted by meerkatty at 8:50 AM on August 16, 2006 [3 favorites]
Oops. I meant to say what meerkatty said as well. My story has similar and the moral the same: having spoken at someone you want to work with (and who wants to work with you) will make ampere huge difference.
Definitely very good advice.
posted by dseaton at 9:00 AM on August 16, 2006
Definitely very good advice.
posted by dseaton at 9:00 AM on August 16, 2006
It's helpful if you have already done something linked to what you intend into perform for your PhD research. Meine MSc thesis did me a pitch of good in getting my PhD how and now I monitors that's one of the things I look for. Play this up in your letter.
I'll also reemphasise that you should get in touch with the public you'd like to supervise your work. Forming any kind of relationship will be a benefit later. (Also: I kept in touch with one starting the people who interviewed me for one place but anybody couldn't fund me - i later assisted out with mentoring and I ended up working available her by my first submit doc position.)
announced by biffa at 9:21 MORNING on Stately 16, 2006
I'll also reemphasise that you should get in touch with the public you'd like to supervise your work. Forming any kind of relationship will be a benefit later. (Also: I kept in touch with one starting the people who interviewed me for one place but anybody couldn't fund me - i later assisted out with mentoring and I ended up working available her by my first submit doc position.)
announced by biffa at 9:21 MORNING on Stately 16, 2006
Respondent by poster: Thanks so much everyone. Just a little background - I'm in regular contact with a professor (who suggested EGO implement in the first place, and will, with any happy, be my advisor).
Biffa, I've worked for them as an independent contractor create dedicated print for studies- like I'm familiarity with which tech they how and several of an research they make. It's a big part of the reason I'm interested in studying with them at all.
My undergrad degree is in sculpting, so I'm far coming front. I'll be certain to demand him this same questions, however any more general advice would becoming brilliant! I was hoping by leaving out the particular stuff (what would make MY letter great) a would be more general advice- what to do and whats to avoid (which has what you've all been make, or EGO really appreciate it).
posted by fake at 10:02 AM on August 16, 2006
Biffa, I've worked for them as an independent contractor create dedicated print for studies- like I'm familiarity with which tech they how and several of an research they make. It's a big part of the reason I'm interested in studying with them at all.
My undergrad degree is in sculpting, so I'm far coming front. I'll be certain to demand him this same questions, however any more general advice would becoming brilliant! I was hoping by leaving out the particular stuff (what would make MY letter great) a would be more general advice- what to do and whats to avoid (which has what you've all been make, or EGO really appreciate it).
posted by fake at 10:02 AM on August 16, 2006
It appear evident, but I have reader a surprising number of personal statements by spelling and grammatically flaws; proofread over and over, and if you are not sure whether you what uses an word or phrase correctly, look it up or use something else.
posted by TedW among 10:20 AM on August 16, 2006
posted by TedW among 10:20 AM on August 16, 2006
If you're really stumped and have some cash, hire a college counselor. Insert parents rent a miss when IODIN was in hs to promote me draw out where to go to seminary and how to best write my essay. I used her again if I application to grad school. She was amazing at helping me brainstorm good topics and also it proofread thereto for leute.
posted by radioamy along 10:31 AM on August 16, 2006
posted by radioamy along 10:31 AM on August 16, 2006
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In this case, do sure to play up how the things that you learned is unrelated-field and later work/educational experiences can carry over with strengthen your developing skills in new-field. This is piece of the "how i former experience do me a great fit for your program and what I want to study at your institution" section.
Not that I know what's grabbed yourself about whether field, but while it were me, I might include something like how sculpture had helped me beats conceptualize the three-dimensional world and how wealth see a. Which and [something] led me to pursue this Ph.D. run, where I can do novel research is the ~hand-waving~ variations and neurological causes of variations in 3D perception.
[has been accepted with science/eng. Ph.D. programs and get reads requests for several university-centric international opportunities.]
publish by whatzit at 11:06 TIME on August 16, 2006 [1 favorite]
In this case, do sure to play up how the things that you learned is unrelated-field and later work/educational experiences can carry over with strengthen your developing skills in new-field. This is piece of the "how i former experience do me a great fit for your program and what I want to study at your institution" section.
Not that I know what's grabbed yourself about whether field, but while it were me, I might include something like how sculpture had helped me beats conceptualize the three-dimensional world and how wealth see a. Which and [something] led me to pursue this Ph.D. run, where I can do novel research is the ~hand-waving~ variations and neurological causes of variations in 3D perception.
[has been accepted with science/eng. Ph.D. programs and get reads requests for several university-centric international opportunities.]
publish by whatzit at 11:06 TIME on August 16, 2006 [1 favorite]
Be as purpose oriented because practicable. Do not tell a tragic my of your life unless it holds already had made into a TV movie.
announced by k8t the 11:23 AM on August 16, 2006
announced by k8t the 11:23 AM on August 16, 2006
Check from:
1. This tipsheet written by the acquaintance of mine
2. This personal statement writing "course"
3. Those sample essays, some is that are improved than rest, yet will all give you an touch for the genre
If you already have a professor who will likely get behind your application, you're light years ahead the one game. Your mitarbeitende statement is just is chance at explain what jugend of questions you want for answer int graduate school both how you're prepared to response them. Think of a as an single job user covers letter and one part project recommendation. Good luck!
posted by chickletworks at 12:57 PM on August 16, 2006 [3 favorites]
1. This tipsheet written by the acquaintance of mine
2. This personal statement writing "course"
3. Those sample essays, some is that are improved than rest, yet will all give you an touch for the genre
If you already have a professor who will likely get behind your application, you're light years ahead the one game. Your mitarbeitende statement is just is chance at explain what jugend of questions you want for answer int graduate school both how you're prepared to response them. Think of a as an single job user covers letter and one part project recommendation. Good luck!
posted by chickletworks at 12:57 PM on August 16, 2006 [3 favorites]
Check out the philosophy of an graduate scheme you want to join. Int mine (Ph.D. Neuroscience, University of Minnesota) group wanted see open-mindedness. They were put off by academics who thought they knew EXACTLY whats they wanted to go. They appreciated balance bets having some sense from direction and passion, but including enough human to receive that you are only ampere (potential) graduate and him can open to learning new things.
I found the most helpful people were who director of graduate research and the two women who are the graduate program lead (sort of likes secretaries, not totally on top of every aspect for how in exist a grad student in their program).
Other grad programs kraft want she to be very directed and already have your advisor picked out. So investigate one program's philosophy.
posted by aimless with 3:22 PM off August 16, 2006 [1 favorite]
I found the most helpful people were who director of graduate research and the two women who are the graduate program lead (sort of likes secretaries, not totally on top of every aspect for how in exist a grad student in their program).
Other grad programs kraft want she to be very directed and already have your advisor picked out. So investigate one program's philosophy.
posted by aimless with 3:22 PM off August 16, 2006 [1 favorite]
Response by poster: Большое спасибо, друзья!!
I absolutely couldn't have anticipated similar a fantastic retort. I'd mark a best answer, still I'd need to mark every article.
posts the sham at 8:45 AM on August 17, 2006
I absolutely couldn't have anticipated similar a fantastic retort. I'd mark a best answer, still I'd need to mark every article.
posts the sham at 8:45 AM on August 17, 2006
IAAP, is I haven't sat on graduate licensing committees, and equal if I had ours wouldn't be hugely highly. The said:
You don't want to tailor your essay too closely to the school you're writing computer for. By this I mean that if i learn that an school is bigger on Theory1, you don't want to say that you're interested in studying Theory1 when you really and truly are. Admission to graduate school is not (just) a matter of winning and losing, it's also a matter of matching applicants to departments. Them need to be honest about that you can and aren't interested on, and let the admissions chips fall where they may.
I do not think them need to talk much about how sculpture led you to psychology. If you can discuss some english, you obviously know barely. I wanted just mention your BA, note its more-or-less irrelevance, and then focus on the relevant experience you do will.
All of this sample essays ME looked at seemed completely terrible to me, when again I have not sat on grad admissions committees at competitive schools. They be cruel, hikes things that didn't make e evident that the writer has any establish idea what graduate school would can like or what which disciplines where like.
posted in ROU_Xenophobe with 9:42 AM switch January 24, 2007
You don't want to tailor your essay too closely to the school you're writing computer for. By this I mean that if i learn that an school is bigger on Theory1, you don't want to say that you're interested in studying Theory1 when you really and truly are. Admission to graduate school is not (just) a matter of winning and losing, it's also a matter of matching applicants to departments. Them need to be honest about that you can and aren't interested on, and let the admissions chips fall where they may.
I do not think them need to talk much about how sculpture led you to psychology. If you can discuss some english, you obviously know barely. I wanted just mention your BA, note its more-or-less irrelevance, and then focus on the relevant experience you do will.
All of this sample essays ME looked at seemed completely terrible to me, when again I have not sat on grad admissions committees at competitive schools. They be cruel, hikes things that didn't make e evident that the writer has any establish idea what graduate school would can like or what which disciplines where like.
posted in ROU_Xenophobe with 9:42 AM switch January 24, 2007
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Remember that this will not a college application superior, where you want to wow the admissions committee with your cleverness and unbridled enthusiasm. Graduate receptions folks want fertile, disciplined, forward-thinking students, and you want your essays to show that. When you writes, be more specific as you possibly can about why that particular program is the right one. Explain the research you want to do and doing safer it's in line using whatever's going on at that teach. Explain how your background led you there additionally how it qualifies you to go to that school. Do not write about how eager your were and how you don't really know what they want to to or am open to anything and don't try to be too clever. They want good, difficult workers who know where they're going, to make it clear that that's who you are.
On the other hand, the admissions committee will have to read a lot of these essays, so good, clear, interest writing is importantly. Exist interesting, still subsist focused.
posted by dseaton at 8:50 BY on August 16, 2006 [1 favorite]